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Clashing Technologies: The legacy of 19th Century Writing Instruction Meets the 21st Century Writing Classroom By Mike Palmquist, Colorado State University[1]
I’ve taken the liberty of quoting my own work to start this talk, not because I’m enamored with my own prose, but because it sets up a central concern that my colleagues and I have about the way writing is taught in colleges and universities. Writing, as we all know, is something we do – an activity, a process. In fact most of us, if asked, would say that we teach writing using a “process approach.” Yet, in most writing classrooms, the primary activity is not writing per se, but rather the discussion of writing. You know the drill: as teachers, we create a writing assignment, introduce it during class, ask students if they have any questions, and send them off to work on the assignment. When students return to class with a draft of the assignment, we might discuss it as a class or perhaps put the students through a peer review session. But only rarely do we ask our students to actually write during class. As a discipline, we’ve used this approach to writing for so long that it has become difficult to think of writing instruction in any other way.[2] Or perhaps I should say that it used to be difficult to think about it in any other way. As it turns out, new instructional tools made possible through information technology have provided us with incentives to rethink the writing classroom. The result has been new approaches to writing instruction, some using computers as central parts of the classroom setting and others using computer networks to extend the traditional classroom. In this paper I’d like to discuss how writing teachers are taking advantage of information technologies to support the teaching and learning that takes place in their courses. I’ll cover three main areas during my talk. First, I’ll discuss the
results of a year-long study that my colleagues and I undertook in
the mid 1990s. The Transitions Study followed four teachers and 173
students in eight classrooms for two semesters. The primary goal of
the study was to try to understand differences between traditional
and computer-supported writing classrooms. Second, I’ll discuss the
growing importance of Web-based instructional resources and course
management systems. Finally, I’ll discuss some emerging technologies,
in particular Web/database integration tools, that make possible a
new range of teaching and learning possibilities, extending our classrooms
and, more important, our imaginations. I. The Transitions Study: Exploring Differences Between Traditional and Computer-Supported Writing ClassroomsThe Transitions Study emerged from the growing popularity of computer-supported writing classrooms in colleges and universities.[3] My own institution, Colorado State University, established one of the first computer-supported writing labs in the country in 1980, due to the efforts of Kate Kiefer and Charles Smith. Later, in 1987, Kate obtained funding for a computer-supported classroom. In 1991, we added a second classroom. Our department now has more than 100 networked computers available to our students and we teach roughly one-quarter to one-third of our writing courses in our two computer classrooms. We’re hoping to add more computer-classrooms, but funding – and available space – is tight. In the early 1990s, we noticed that some of our teachers had become so enamored with teaching in our computer classrooms that they didn’t want to teach anywhere else. Unfortunately, there was enough demand for the classrooms that we couldn’t accommodate everyone’s wishes to teach in the computer classrooms. Some teachers found themselves teaching in a computer classroom one semester and in a traditional classroom the next. Others found themselves teaching in both types of classroom during the same semester. Kate Kiefer, Jake Hartvigsen, Barbara Godlew, and I conducted the Transitions Study to explore differences in the teaching and learning of writing fostered by these two classroom contexts. We hoped the study would help us begin answering three main questions:
We attempted to answer these questions by observing eight writing classrooms. We used a quasi-experimental design that incorporated several quantitative and qualitative information gathering techniques. Unlike a true experiment, we did not assign students randomly to the eight classrooms in the study. Nor did we randomly assign teachers to each classroom. Instead, we worked with the teachers to create a teaching schedule that would work for them. We asked each teacher to teach essentially the same class in a computer-supported classroom and a traditional classroom. Each teacher taught a section of our required, first-year composition course, following the same general syllabus. The major assignments were identical. The key difference was in how those assignments were presented in each type of classroom. The teachers were free to arrange the traditional classroom in whatever manner they wished. Some left the desks in rows, while others placed them in a circle or semi-circle. The computer-classroom was arranged with the computers on a countertop around the perimeter of the room. Students worked on chairs with rollers, allowing them to work on the computers or to gather around the seminar table located in the center of the room.
We collected a large amount of information during the study. Our information collection methods included:
In this paper I’d like to focus on four key findings from our analysis
of this information: differences between the two classrooms settings
in interaction between teachers and students, differences in interactions
among students, differences in attitudes toward writing during class,
and differences in student confidence about writing. Student/Teacher
Interactions
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| We found differences in
the amount and pattern of interactions among students and teachers
in the two classroom settings. Students in the computer classrooms
reported high levels of interaction with teachers during class
more than did students in the traditional classrooms (see Figure
2). Similarly, our observations of the two classroom settings
indicated higher levels of student/teacher interaction in the
computer classrooms (see Figure 3). Perhaps most surprising, we noticed a distinctly different pattern between classroom settings in teacher/student interactions over the course of the semester. Students who were obtaining lower grades in the course were more likely to interact with their teachers if they were in the computer classroom than if they were in the traditional classroom (see Figure 4). |
![]() Figure 2: Students in the computer classrooms indicated, in their weekly contact sheets, higher levels of interactions during class with teachers. (p < .01) |
Students who earned a grade of D in the course were nearly four
times as likely to talk with a teacher if they were in a computer
classroom. (We attribute the low number of interactions with students
who earned a grade of F to their low attendance in class; in fact,
only a handful of students earned an F.)

Figure 3: Our classroom observations indicated that students
in the computer classrooms initiated contact with teachers more frequently,
while teachers initiated contact about as frequently in each classroom
setting.

Figure 4: On average,
students earning a grade of D in the computer classrooms were far
more likely to talk with their teachers during, immediately before,
or immediately after class than were students who earned a grade of
D in the traditional classrooms.
In addition, our qualitative study of the classrooms suggests that the nature of student/teacher interactions differed between the two classroom settings. One of the teachers in the study observed, about interactions with students in the computer classroom:
The contact that I have with students is more closely related to the writing project that they're working on. And a lot of it is more student solicited. They're the ones that determine when they want me to help them with their writing, rather than me saying in the traditional classroom, “Okay, on Tuesday and Wednesday, we're going to have conferences.” I have conferences with my students continuously in the computer classroom.
Similarly, we observed differences in the amount of interaction among students in the two classroom settings. Students in the computer classroom reported, in the weekly contact sheets, a higher level of interaction with classmates than did students in the traditional classrooms (see Figure 5). Our observations of the classrooms also indicated a higher level of interaction among students in the computer classrooms (see Figure 6).[4]
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| Figure 5: On average, students reported much higher levels of per-class interaction with classmates in the computer classrooms. (p < .001) | Figure 6: Our classroom observations also indicated differences between the two classroom settings in the number of interactions students had with classmates per class session. |
We found significant differences between the two classroom settings in student attitudes toward writing during class. In general, students in the traditional classrooms resisted writing during class, while those in the computer classrooms saw it as natural and expected. One teacher observed that students in the traditional classrooms resisted writing during class:
It's almost impossible to get people to draft with a pen and piece of paper in the traditional classroom. . . If I have students sitting around in a circle doing freewriting by hand, I find that they're resistant. They're lethargic. They roll their eyes. They often don't want to do it.
In contrast, a teacher in the computer classroom observed:
That time is so wonderful because students don't just sit and draft. They talk to their neighbor about their draft. They ask you questions. You filter around the room. It becomes a giant workshop. And yet, students are producing, so it's a workshop with some production going on. It's really pretty marvelous.
These differences in attitudes toward writing also appeared to affect students’ perception of the role of peer review during class meetings. A teacher indicated that students in the computer classrooms would begin drafting immediately after a peer review session, while those in the traditional classroom did not:
In the traditional classroom after fifteen minutes they're talking about what they did on the weekend or what they're planning to do on the weekend. And in the computer classroom, they're working. And when they finish, they go back to their computers and start revising. I mean, sometimes they'll talk [about social issues], but the degree and frequency is a lot less.
These differences seem to parallel differences between an art history course and an art studio. Students in an art history course expect to learn about art, while those in an art studio course expect to create art – or at least to practice techniques for doing so. Similarly, students in the traditional classrooms seemed to expect to learn about writing, but not necessarily to do any of it. We speculated that this might be the result of their experiences in previous writing classes, where it is likely that little writing was actually done during class. In contrast, students in the computer classrooms entered a classroom setting that differed markedly from the classrooms in which they had been taught before. They may, as a result, have felt less bound by the expectations shaped by their previous experiences in writing classrooms.
Whatever the cause, the computer classroom was viewed by students as a place in which writing was done. One student in a computer classroom speculated that the computers made it easier to teach – and learn – writing:
I think the main reason she wanted to allow us to use the computers and for her to teach the computer class is to give us the opportunity to work on our papers in class because that gave her the chance and the opportunity to be able to walk around, read our papers, answer questions right there. I mean she can look at our screen and see our paper, whereas if it was just a regular class and you have all of these papers and all of your articles and resources, and you come to class and you want to ask her a question about my paper and I left that piece of paper at home, you can't ask her. Here everything was just right there. I just think it gave the opportunity to spend more time with each individual student. She learned the weaknesses we all had and our strengths and always seemed able to help us with our weaknesses and always encouraged us with our strengths and said, “Okay. Keep doing this, but you need to add a little bit of this or that or your organization skills need to change.” And she would actually sit there on the computer and help us figure it out. Or if we had printed off the copy, she would sit there and—I can't even remember all the times that everyone has just gone up and she's like, “Okay. I'm open for questions. Come up.”.
The final result of the Transitions Study that I’d like to discuss here is an increase in student confidence in writing ability that we found in the computer classrooms but not in the traditional classrooms. The two classroom settings began the semester with similar levels of writing confidence. However, by the end of the classroom, students in the computer classrooms reported higher levels of confidence than they did at the beginning of the semester. On a one-to-five scale, with five being the highest level of confidence, students increased their reported levels of writing confidence from 3.42 to 3.54 over the course of the semester (p < .07, df = 1, 71).
We speculate that this increase in confidence is a result of the
greater amount of interaction in the sections taught in the computer
classroom, as well as the ability of teachers and students to discuss
writing as it occurred. However, although statistically significant
at the .10 level, the change is not great (slightly more than one-tenth
of a point). The fact that a difference exists in one setting and
not in the other, however, suggests that there are differences in
the learning environments that may lead to improvements in student
writing.
A second area in which technology is significantly affecting the
teaching of writing is the emergence of Web-based instructional resources,
such as the many online writing centers that have been created over
the past decade, and course management systems, such as WebCT, BlackBoard,
and SyllaBase. These resources, easily accessed through Web browsers,
allow students and teachers to access information, activities, and
communication tools that support the teaching and learning of writing.
At Colorado State University, we have been working on an online writing center since the late 1980s, when Kate Kiefer and Dawn Rodrigues began work on an early network-based system they called the Electronic Writing Services. The EWS used a UNIX server to connect to the Internet. Students and teachers could use the system by sending electronic mail requests to the server, which returned information to the sender in a reply email message. Writers could also send a file containing a draft document to the UNIX server with the request that it perform a Writers’ Workbench analysis on it.
Unfortunately, technical problems dogged this project and, in 1992, we shifted from it to a new, LAN-based system that allowed writers and teachers to access information through a Microsoft Windows program. This system, called the Online Writing Center, provided access to model documents, instructional resources for writers, and interactive tutorials. In 1996, we shifted the Online Writing Center to the World Wide Web, where it can now be found at http://writing.colostate.edu (see Figures 7 and 8). The project has grown substantially over time, and it has benefited from the contributions of more than 100 writers. It serves not only as the online focus for our Writing Center, but also as the home for our campus writing-across-the-curriculum program. It provides:
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As online writing centers have grown more sophisticated, writing teachers
and students are using them with greater frequency. You can find more
information about online writing centers through a recently created
group called the Online Writing Center Consortium at http://owcc.colostate.edu
(see Figure 9).
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| Figure 9: The home page for the Online Writing Center Consortium (http://owcc.colostate.edu) |
Another example of Web-based resources available to writing teachers
are online journals and resource sites, such as Kairos: A Journal
for Teachers of Writing in Webbed Environments (http://129.118.38.138/kairos/)
and Academic.Writing: Interdisciplinary Perspectives on Communication
Across the Curriculum (http://aw.colostate.edu). Academic.Writing
emerged out of our efforts at Colorado State University to support
our WAC program. Initially, it consisted of the WAC Clearinghouse,
a collection of resources on writing across the curriculum. Unfortunately,
we found that many of the early WAC Clearinghouse supporters – faculty
from across the country – were finding it difficult to list “working
on a Web site” as a significant scholarly activity on their annual
performance reports, so we created a refereed journal and added them
to the editorial board. The WAC Clearinghouse is now part of Academic.Writing.
Together, they provide a wide range of resources for writing teachers
and teachers who want to use writing in their courses.
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| Figure 10: The home page for Academic.Writing (http://aw.colostate.edu) |
Course management tools, such as WebCT, BlackBoard, and SyllaBase, can provide a great deal of support for writing courses. Initially developed to support distance education or online courses, these tools have also proven quite useful for face-to-face courses, both in traditional and computer-supported classrooms. Currently, we are using WebCT and SyllaBase on our campus, and SyllaBase in our writing program. This semester, we are supporting more than 100 sections of writing and writing-intensive courses with SyllaBase.
In general, course management tools provide several password protected Web sites for a given class. The teacher has the ability to configure the Web site as he or she sees fit, and often has the ability to turn on or turn off specific tools available through the course management tool (such as discussion forums, chat rooms, and so on). Students access the class Web page by going to a common login page and entering their user name and password. Once they log in, they can visit the class page and access:
Teachers have access to all of these tools, as well as additional tools, such as class roster management and grading tools. Depending on the system, teachers may also have the ability to view records for individual students, for specific groups of students, or for the class as a whole.
When I login to SyllaBase and visit the class Web page for my course, Writing Online, I see the following screen. From this screen, I can view my other courses, view administrative options, or use specific tools on the Web page.
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| Figure 11: My SyllaBase page for CO302: Writing Online |
Some of the tools I use on a regular basis include:
Examples of these tools are shown below:
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| Figure 12: The calendar tool in SyllaBase |
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| Figure 13: The File Sharing Tool in SyllaBase |
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| Figure 14: A SyllaBase discussion forum |
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| Figure 15: The Homework Manger Tool in SyllaBase |
In addition to its obvious applications for distance education courses, we have found Syllabase – and, by extension, other course management tools – to be useful for writing courses taught in traditional classrooms and computer-supported classrooms. We have also found it useful for “hybrid” courses – courses that meet primarily online, like distance courses, but also have a face-to-face component (for example, bi-weekly class meetings).
The advantages of course management tools include:
The disadvantages of course management systems include:
I’d like to conclude this paper with a brief mention of some new technologies that promise to shape the way we will teach in the next decade. Broadly described, these technologies are the integration of the Web and databases. In fact, these tools are already being used in education, since the course management tools I just described are an example of Web/database integration.
Simply stated, Web/database integration tools separate content from presentation. The actual “content” – text, images, sound, video, data – are stored in a database. Depending on who you are, what you want to do, and what you’ve already done, the Web page is created dynamically and displayed for you. For instance, if you are a teacher, you will see a different page than your students will see when you log into a course management system. Similarly, if you are a student, you will see a different set of options on your class page than some of your classmates might see. Although you are all looking at the same Web page address, the page that is displayed is customized for you – and, as a result, it can differ in appearance and content from the page as it appears to someone else.
In addition to course management systems, writing teachers will find themselves using this technology with increasing frequency. For instance, you might find yourself using a site such as the Online Writing Center Consortium (http://owcc.colostate.edu), which I described earlier. The pages on the Online Writing Center Consortium are generated using Allaire’s ColdFusion server. Once you’ve joined the Consortium (it’s free), you can contribute to the site. In fact, the resources on the site – a bibliography, a list of links, a list of consultants, a description of resources on participating sites, and the descriptions of the sites themselves – are all created by members of the Consortium. Unlike most Web sites, where someone must code every page by hand, these pages change dynamically, displaying whatever information has been added to the database. As a member, you can not only add, but edit or delete the entries you’ve created.
This technology is also ideal for interactive tutorials. We are currently converting our older, CGI and Perl-based tutorials on our Online Writing Center into tutorials that take advantage of ColdFusion’s database integration capabilities. Our students will be able to login to our site, work on a project – or continue an activity they had worked on earlier – and then print, save to file, or send their work to someone via electronic mail.
Let me conclude with three main points:
Teachers, of course, will have the final say in how technology shapes their teaching. In the coming decades, however, I am confident that we will find that available technologies, in combination with our increasing understanding of their strengths and weaknesses, will result in a writing “classroom” that differs markedly from those in which we once taught.
[1] Mike Palmquist is Professor of English and University Distinguished Teaching Scholar at Colorado State University. His email address is Mike.Palmquist@ColoState.edu. His Web address is http://lamar.colostate.edu/~mp. This talk was presented at San Diego State University, December 1, 2000, as part of the symposium series sponsored by the Certificate Program in Technical and Scientific Writing.
[2] I’m oversimplifying here, but I’m doing so to make the point that the majority of writing classrooms are taught using a modified “workshop model,” in which the primary focus of instruction is the discussion of writing that students do outside of class. I’m certainly aware of the long history of writing instruction that involves writing during class, particularly in classes taught during the heyday of expressivism in the 1960s and 1970s. I’m also aware of the important role that writing plays during many forms of individualized instruction. And, of course, I’m aware of the work my colleague, Robert Zoellner, did in the late 1960s and early 1970s, when he developed the “talk-write” curriculum. By no means do I want to suggest that all writing teachers, everywhere (and everywhen) teach in the same manner. I think it is fair to suggest, however, that most writing courses are taught using this approach.
[3] For more information about the Transitions Study, see Transitions: Teaching Writing in Computer-Supported and Traditional Classrooms, by Mike Palmquist, Kate Kiefer, James Hartvigsen, and Barbara Godlew, published by Ablex in 1998.
[4] For a more detailed discussion of these differences, including consideration of the differences between our observation and students’ self-reports, see Palmquist, Kiefer, Hartvigsen, and Godlew (1998).
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